Thursday, October 14, 2010

Equation #1

3 comments:

  1. -A boy found some money. Later he found $12 more. Then he gave it to the bank and after 1 year it doubled the amount of money. Then, he gave 1/5 of the doubled amount of money to his friend which is $10.

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  2. William Lee + Enya SeoungOctober 27, 2010 at 7:51 PM

    I think that this story was clear but i wish they could have used different kinds of characters for example not only a boy and friend but more creative. but overall i think that this story made sense and had fun reading and understanding the story

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  3. Justin Yoo and Jasmine ParkOctober 27, 2010 at 10:41 PM

    The story was good and clear, but it should be more creative. I think it should be deposit instead of give. I think you should put a question at the end and may be a little longer.

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